The celestial realm is doing a waltz
Debris rocks with firefly tails
Are a part of this romance of the cosmos
While spirals of light and gasses are moving
Through an endless expansive universe
Down on one of the rotating rocks
Are a life force of ingenuity
Breathing atoms of purpose
But flesh and bone of pride at times
They wonder if there is other life
They send satellites and robots to assess
But what they are forgetting
Is the One Being who is always there
He has been there before eons began
He watches from afar
But He looks deeply into each heart
Inspecting each motivation and loving act
He has us in His ancient hands
And on His never ending thoughts
So is there life on other planets?
There is more activity than we could ever believe
Β© Carly Wiggins 2018
Brilliant!!!
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Thank you so much, scienceshocker. π
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Sure, Iβd be happy to. π
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Deep, thoughtful….incredible…
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Very nice poem, dear Carly π
…and surely there is life and life-form in the cosmos – we are surely not alone but are also a very big cosmic family within the creation of God.
Best wishes and hugs
Didi
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Yes, we are a part of a big cosmic family. Good way of putting it. π
Hugs to you too. π€
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What a wonderful poem Carly :):) “But He looks deeply into each heart
Inspecting each motivation and loving act” Love it :):) LORD, thank You for blessing Carly :):)
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Thank you, Margaret for your lovely and encouraging words! π God does into each of our hearts. β€οΈ
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It is a pleasure :):)
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This is great! ππΌ
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Thank you!
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Carly, what a powerful, deeply thoughtful poem! Keep writing, sister!
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Aww, thanks Melissa! π I truly appreciate the compliment.
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I enjoyed reading your wonderful wonderfilled Poem, Carly! Keep looking up, and keep speaking up through your poetry. β€
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Aww, thanks Tina. I truly appreciate it. I find sometimes itβs easier to write my thoughts and emotions than articulate them with words. Happy you liked it. π
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I can relate to that. I’m very much an introvert and writer at heart. βΊ<3
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I am too and I think being an introvert is a wonderful thing! Personally, it influences my writing.
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Very well done! I love it.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it Roth. π
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