Greenery swaying
In invisible motion
Arching their arms out
Greenery swaying
In invisible motion
Arching their arms out
Is God Playing Games With Us?
Heartfelt conversations with my mind!
Understanding creativity, and the human nature.
embrace the magic
Poetry, Stories, and Other Musings With Spilt Ink
An Attempt to Use Words to Bridge the Gap in Our Hearts
A trip through life with fingers crossed and eternal optimism.
binge thinking and other things in life
Nothing is immortal
Now we see through a glass, darkly
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. - Edgar Allan Poe
Casting for the Deep
"you will find pieces of me wherever you wander"
Poetry & Musings of Life & Faith
Scribbles by Afzal Moolla
#LiveRestored
A Soulful Touch, in Writing
Beautiful poem Carly
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Sadje. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Youβre welcome π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice but haiku is not written in caps but as a sentence divided in 3 lines π€
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for the feedback, Laughing_Soul. π So one thought broken into three lines? Did I do the syllables correctly? Which I believe is 5/7/5.
LikeLike
Don’t bother about syllables, it’s no more a compulsion because Japanese wrote haiku in morae. Only remember 1st two lines have to be a phrase and 3rd line should say another story.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ok, thanks for the advice.
LikeLike